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How do you find this poem? Birthday Eve
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I wept the day I knew
It would be my last day in heaven.
I cried my eyes out wishing,
The angels would hide me,
I longed for moments spent,
In heavens ballrooms,
Eden tunes played,
On gold laced ebony pianos,
To which we would waltz.
Between a sniff and a running nose,
I rewalked all my days there,
Where all mankind could live,
In full and without a care.
So as I was led in chorus,
To heaven’s gate on St Peter’s watch.
I felt a tear wet my eye,
And on the other side,
Another tear dropped,
Unnoticed due to the screams,
One last push ,a sigh,
And they looked at me,
Wiped my tears and with a kiss,
Said I was heaven sent. | | is this about being born? is quite good, i'm not one for poetry but i like it. | Baby names. which sound best? i have a list of bby names but i dont know how good they sound.
please rate the following out of 10 ( 10 being really god and 1 being rubbish)
boys:
brandon scott
damon kai
cody robert
edward tyler
jasper evan
leo todd
jacob todd
toby kai
robbie todd
scott elliot
robin jacob
ryan kai-lea
jasper lea
girls:
adele fay
isabella eve
ebony robin
brooklyn eva-lee
emele paige
harriet taylor
mia paige
elena paige
riley robin
taylor robin
kia paige
and can u also suggest some of your own that i might like, so which or mix the names i suggested up to make a better one. | Brandon Scott- 6/10. Both are very nice names, but I'm not going to lie- are kind of plain and boring. Not bad though.
Damon Kai- 4/10. I'm really confused on how to pronounce Kai, (is it K-ee, K-IY??) but Damon is not my cup of tea. It's not a bad name, but it's really not my style. If you like it- more power to you!
Cody Robert- 5/10. It's kind of like Brandon Scott. Not a bad name, but realllly boring! I can't tell you how many people have the name "cody robert" Probably thousands upon thousands. It's just not original.
Edward Tyler- (2/10) I really don't think it flows well. Tyler Edward would sound much better together, I'm just saying. I really HATE names that don't really flow that well, which is why it's so low, probably. Plus yet again- PLAIN.
Jasper Evan- (8/10). I'm not gonna lie, I don't like the name Jasper. But with Evan it just sounds so much better. Good choice, I like it :)
Leo Todd- (3/10). NO!
Jacob Todd (4/10). You seem to have a pattern with your names. They're nice names and there's nothing wrong with them at all, but they're all just so boring and common. I'm sorry, I don't like the name Todd either.
Toby Kai (9/10) I still don't know how exactly to pronounce Kai, but I do like Toby a lot.
Robbie Todd (6/10) Don't like Robbie, Don't like Todd. Too plain and too common. And, not really "old names" but it sounds more like a 90s guys name... Most of your names are like that.
Scott Elliot (10/10). Even though Scott is extremely popular, I like Elliot and Scott sounds really good with it :)
Robin Jacob (2/10). Robin's a girl's name isn't it? Or am I just imagining that. Well, even if it wasn't I still wouldn't like it.
Ryan Kai-Lea-(1/10) Ryan's o.k. Kai-Lea?? What is that?...
Jasper Lea- (7/10) I like Jasper and Lea. But lea kind of looks like the girl's name leah (LEE-UH) Change the spelling and you're good to go!
Girls:
Adele Fay-(5/10). Adele is my great aunt's name...nuff said. but Fay is very cute, but I think it's supposed to be spelled Faye. Maybe it can be spelled either way, but the way you have it looks incorrect.
Isabella Eve (10/10)- Love Isabelle. Eve isn't my cup of tea, but it's cute :)
Ebony Robin (3/10) I just don't like it.
Brooklyn eva-lee (7/10) Brooklyn- adore it! Eva lee??... No.
Emele Paige- (8/10) Is this supposed to be pronounced like Emily? Or is it (E-meal?) If it's Emily. Cute. Plain, but classic and cute.
Harriot Taylor (2/10) Harriot? Really.
Mia Paige (10/10) Very cute, although I think Mia more as a nickname for Amelia. But it's whatever floats your boat! Either way it's adorable.
Elena Paige (6/10) Eh, not terrible but not wonderful. It's a very solid name.
Riley Robin (10/10) I LOVE LOVE LOVE Riley, too cute. but idk if robin is the best middle name. Maybe it's just me though,I don't like first and middle names to repeat initials. But it's whatever. It sounds good together, though.
Taylor Robin (8/10) You sure do like the name Robin, huh? Haha. It's cute. I'm not a big fan of Taylor for a girl. But again, it's whatever makes you happy. I still don't like Robin, but if you're going to stick with it I would change the spelling to Robyn. I just think it presents itself better...but that's just me.
Kia Paige (7/10) You also like the name Paige, I can see. I appreciate you using it as a middle name, though. Paige as a first name-ew. but anyways, I like Kia and Paige sounds good with it. | Could i please have some opinions on these names? Hi everyone, my friend is 32 weeks and 4 days pregnant with a little girl and has decided on the name Phoebe for her, but it totally stuck on a middle name, could you please leave some opinions on what you think goes well together and which don't?
Phoebe Selena McNicol
Phoebe Grace McNicol
Phoebe Scarlett McNicol
Phoebe Cheyenne McNicol
Phoebe Shiloh McNicol
Phoebe Shylah McNicol
Phoebe Sienna McNicol
Phoebe Skyler McNicol
Phoebe Tailynn McNicol
Phoebe Mae McNicol
Phoebe Hattie McNicol
Phoebe Nelly McNicol
Phoebe Heidi McNicol
Phoebe Eve McNicol
Phoebe Ebony McNicol
Phoebe Elyse McNicol
Phoebe Estelle McNicol
Phoebe Evelyn McNicol
Phoebe Jacelyn McNicol
sorry for the amount of names lol we've been name hunting lol | | I Like Phoebe Chayanne < But Spelt Like That :) xxx | Advice on these baby names please!? Harry John
Jackson
Jacob David
Maddison June
Ruby Eve
Summer Seren
Cameron
Ebony Ava
What's your fave? Any idea's for middle names for Cameron and Jackson? Feel free to mix and match! :D Thanks! | Harry John: It's slightly old fashioned but very lovable. My favorite of the boys names!
Jackson Tyler
Jackson David
Jackson Hugh
Jackson Ronald
Jackson Trey
Jackson is very masculine. Good choice!
Jacob David: makes me think of the bible:) In my opinion Jacob is used a bit too often. (Im not sure but I think it's number one right now)
It's a very common combination but still beautiful.
Maddison June: Love it! very girly
Ruby Eve: love the name Ruby but not with Eve. sounds like "Rubeve" if you say it fast. What about Ruby Joy?
Summer Seren: did you mean Summer Serena? Well I prefer Summer Serena! makes me think of summer;)
Cameron Joy
Cameron Felice
Cameron Lisa
Cameron Liz
I'm not so fond of the name Cameron for a girl
Ebony Ava: I love Ebony because it's a nature name and kind of special. However, I think Ava doesn't flow with it so well. What about Ebony Jade
Ebony Marissa
or
Ebony Rose? | If you had these sets of girls, what would you name them ? #2? i did one of these the other day, and a few people asked for more, so here is my second one :)
so, if you had these sets of girls, what would you name them ?
Twins;
1st Set; first names your fave names, middle names after yourself
2nd Set; first names from your fave animated movie, middle names after gemstones
Triplets;
1st Set; first names start with K, middle names are flowers
2nd Set; first names after your mother, middle names whatever you want
3rd Set; first names any variant of Lily that you can think of (can't use Lily though), middle names after your birthday (either month, star sign, chinese zodiac etc)
Quadruplets;
1 Set; choose from below:
First Names:
Justine, Naomi, Amanda, Janis, Rachel, Katherine, Lisa, Amelia, Gwendolyne, June, Ebony, Christine
Middle Names:
Eve, Jane, Robyn, Kim, Louise, Marie, Dawn, Violet, Doreen, Heather, Eliza, Sahara
~ also, you can't use one name twice. that includes my list of above names, if you've already used a name, or the name you wanted to use is in my list, use another one you like :) ~
thanks !
and star or let me know if you want more (: | Twins;
-- Evelyn Lily and Ruby Violet
-- Kiara Ruby and Nala Pearl
Triplets;
-- Kaia Lily, Keirsten Azalea and Keira Violet
-- Joelle Charlotte, Anna Imogen and Lily Evangeline (Mum is Johanna Lily)
-- Lilith Augusta, Liliana Thursday, Lilibetta Leonie (I was born on a Thursday in August)
Quads;
-- Amelia Eve
-- Ebony Dawn
-- Naomi Louise
-- Katherine Violet
=) | Do you like these names? ebony
bobbi marie-f
patrick eve-f
and do you also like
jordana marie-f
isobelle patrick-f
angel and ashton for twin m and f
livia-f
missy for a middle name on a girl x | | I like Ebony for a girl and Angel & Ashton for a boy | Names? Be brutally honest.? Kaitlyn Emily
Lauren Hermione
Samantha April
Bronwyn Grace
Georgie Emma
Ebony Juliette
Louisa Clare
Lucinda Eve
Peace Elizabeth
Martha Kelsey
Shannon Alice
Sophie Cate
Izabelle Mia
Aurora Charlotte
Georgie Emma
Madeleine Esme
Dylan Page
Edward Jay
Matthew Brent
Dimitri Aaron
Jackson Eric
Spencer James
Parker Evan
George Christopher
Peter Thomas
Nate Christian
Chase Zachary
I know there's a lot so you don't have to say too much about each. Afterall I am not expecting, I just like names. Make sure you tell me anything about the name you really love or anything you despise greatly.
Thanks :D | These are the ones I like best out of the list:
Kaitlyn Emily
Lauren Hermione
Sophie Cate
Izabelle Mia
Dylan Page
Parker Evan
Nate Christian | Hey could you read this and tell me what you think? www.short-story.net/story.php?s=8…
please!!!! i really need to know. i welcome any and all responces
Red Snow
As I stalk the night I locate my prey. A man and woman, young and in love. They hold each other embracing, guarding each other against the pending storm. It is this act of affection which marks them as unwilling participants in tonights games. how dare they be so happy? Enjoying life while I am cast aside by society to wander my pitiful existence. Tonight I will once again exact my revenge on love.
I pursue them as they enter the park. It is a cold winters night and the sky whispers of a storm her way. The park is deserted at this time of night. Tall, full pine trees line the paths and trails that weave a maze through the trees. My breath fogs in front of me as I walk. I hope I am not finished by the time the storm arrives. I always did think that the snow looked better red.
The couple float along the paths on clouds built of their love of life, blissfully unaware of their pending fate. As I glide after them on wings of hatred, macabre thoughts dancing through my head are accompanied by images of cadaverous faces parading thorough my minds eye.
The couple turns down a particularly desolate path and I realize my time is now. My thoughts become giddy as the anticpation mounts, almost to an unbarable level. The wind picks up, adding to my excitement. The storm is almost here, clouds casting an orange glow over the trees. I change my position and enter the trees, to approach them from a better angle.
I step from the trees, silently as a predator on the hunt. Then the couple turns and I know. I have let my stupidity and hate lure me into a trap. I realize that irony has dealt me a new hand. Predator becoming prey, prey becoming predator. The place i had untill recently thought of as my playground has become my final battleground.
As I stare helplessly at the man and woman I cannot run. I do not know how i missed it before. There beauty is so enrapturing, it is as if I am being hypnotized. I feel as if I am witnessing a miracle, a goddess come to walk the land of mortals. Her hair is the color of ebony, the silky strands reaching out in the storms wind to wrap the world in its sinister embrace. Her eyes are the color of emerelds, reaching into my very soul. Her voluptous body adds to her godly appearance.
The god standing aside her contrasts her arcane beauty with a luminous allure all his own. His downy platinum hair mingles with hers in the wind. The sight of his eyes bring tears to my eyes, they are colors of cerulean that have never before graced a human face. He presence reminds me of an angel fallen to earth.
As I stand here on the eve of my demise, I am not afraid. As they stride toward me, I am still unafraid. I know now what they are and I welcome my fate, a reprieve from this desolate existence. As I lay cradled in her arms a pain, sharp and distant rings through my body. I found it peculiar that though I had always feared death, I now lay embracing it with willing arms.
As the snow falls around us my last thought is that I always thought the snow looked better red. | | honestly? well, i won't sugar coat it. i got board in the seconed paragraph. i don't know who you are targeting to, if it was a teacher, or a couple in love, yeah, it would be great, but if you where targating towareds young adults, teen, or guys, than i would write it a little different. i depends on who you are writing to. | Can you help me choose appropriate names for characters in a story I'm writing? The story starts off in an average town. Everyone's cordial, no one fights or commits any crimes, people respect eachother's privacy- in all a regular utopia. I was thinking the plot wpould be about a boy who stood apart of the rest of the townspeople and felt suffocated in this paradise. He wants to break free so he decides to run away from there and go somewhere dangerous and exciting. As he dreams up and saves his money to buy some means of transportation (maybe a motorcycle?) he falls for this teenage girl who he ends up corrupting. That's what I have so far- I know it's not the BEST storyline, but I think I can change it up as I go along. So anyway, I've collected some names that I think would fit the main characters' personas but I can't choose which one would be the best. Any help would be fantastic. Thanks a million! :D
Rebellious teenager (male):
• Adam
• Alistair
• Anthony
• Asher
• Bart
• Bleu
• Brad
• Brandon
• Brent
• Carlos
• Chase
• Chris
• Colton
• David
• Finn
• Garrett
• Ira
• Jack
• Jason
• Jasper
• Jay
• Joel
• Josh
• Mark
• Max
• Sam
• Sean
• Seth
• Sherri
• Spencer
Not easily impressionable, kind-hearted, moral, independent, and intelligent teenager (female):
• Abitha
• Aisha
• Alex
• Alexis
• Alice
• Alina
• Amaryllis
• Amber
• Amélie
• Artemis
• Ashley
• August
• Avita
• Ayla
• Azalea
• Blair
• Bo
• Bree
• Brooke
• Brooklyn
• Carmen
• Casey
• Celeste
• Chiara
• Chloë
• Cilia
• Claire
• Clarissa
• Clementine
• Cleo
• Colby
• Colette
• Cyra
• Dakota
• Delilah
• Denise
• Desiree
• Ebony
• Echo
• Elle
• Ericka
• Erin
• Ester
• Eve
• Fleur
• Gaby
• Gaia
• Giselle
• Godiva
• Gwen
• Hazel
• Holli
• Hyacinth
• Indigo
• Iris
• Jasmine
• Jazz
• Jessie
• Jo
• Jordan
• Joyce
• Juillet
• Juniper
• Kendra
• Lani
• Lauren
• Leah
• Leilani
• Liat
• Lilah
• Lisa
• Liz
• Luna
• Madison
• Maya
• Melanie
• Melody
• Mona
• Monique
• Myra
• Nadia
• Naomi
• Natalie
• Nicole
• Odette
• Olivia
• Ophelia
• Paris
• Parvati
• Pepper
• Pheonix
• Raven
• Rhea
• Ruby
• Sabrina
• Sage
• Sam
• Sara
• Sasha
• Scarlett
• Senna
• Sephora
• Serena
• Shyla
• Sienna
• Sierra
• Silver
• Simone
• Stella
• Sterling
• Summer
• Svetlana
• Sylvia
• Taylor
• Tegan
• Tempest
• Terra
• Tess
• Thea
• Valarie
• Vanessa
• Vanille
• Vega
• Venus
• Virtue
• Vivienne
• Water
• Willow
• Xanthe
• Zeva
P.S. I haven't chosen their appearances, races, etc. yet but if you have any other names that aren't on these lists that you'd think would go great, please feel free to share. :) | There are software packages for writer's out there to help them name characters. Also, this sound like the movie with Toby Maguire called Pleasantville (it was great!) Check it out for common themes with what your writing.
Also, since he's to stand out, you may want to give him an unusual name for the town, yet the names are still common. Like Robert William Lee (lastname) or Amy Alesha Leann (lastname). In other words, none of the names are unusual, but because there are 3 names (all first name sounding), it is unusual.
Good Luck! | Rate these names from one to ten? 10 pts? 1. voielle (voy ell)
2. magdala
3. hope
4. constance
5. moriah
6. carol
7. eve
8. fay
9. mae
10. ebony
11. devony
12. violet
13. irene
14. madeleine
15. holly
16. lois
17. ivy
18. fern ( i know it's a weird name sorry :)
19. elise
20. coraline (like the book)
thanks :) i will give thumbs ups :) also and a ten points :) | 1. voielle 2
2. magdala 1
3. hope 4
4. constance 6
5. moriah 4
6. carol 5
7. eve 7
8. fay 7
9. mae 6
10. ebony 6
11. devony 7
12. violet 5
13. irene 5
14. madeleine 8
15. holly 8
16. lois 5
17. ivy 5
18. fern 5
19. elise 5
20. coraline 8.5 |
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